Thursday, October 1, 2009



mine is an innocent love
why dont you understand as you are my sole


you made my evening yesterday
but you have forgotten me only today


you may not think about me in future
I wont think something else other than u
thats my nature........
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8 comments:

  1. Pradeep RaoOctober 2, 2009 at 10:23 AM

    The last 2 lines are touching.. as a whole its good & the depth of the subject needs a bit of improvement

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  2. RAKOctober 2, 2009 at 11:26 PM

    thanks........i ll definetly try to improve .........

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  3. UnknownOctober 10, 2009 at 9:38 PM

    very nice raksha
    there is may be one word i get confused soul or sole see it

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  4. RAKOctober 10, 2009 at 10:02 PM

    thanks.......its sole only.....which means everything u only for me.....soul means aathma....i didn't mean soul...

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  5. ಸೀತಾರಾಮ. ಕೆ. / SITARAM.KOctober 11, 2009 at 11:23 PM

    nice

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  6. UnknownNovember 26, 2009 at 6:37 AM

    mmm simply superb raksha....

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  7. ಅನಿಕೇತನ ಸುನಿಲ್December 8, 2009 at 8:07 PM

    Good one :-)

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  8. RAKDecember 11, 2009 at 8:27 AM

    @chweet gal,anikethan.......thank u .....

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